On 11/23/2016 10:11 AM, mayqel qunenoS wrote:
jIHaDchoHta'DI',
The *-ta'* here is unnecessary, and could be interpreted in multiple ways; it's not strictly wrong. But if you just said *jIHaDchoHDI',* you're saying /as soon as I begin studying,/ which is obviously what you're going for.
'ej jIbuS 'e' vInID,
*'e' vInIDDI'*
'ej SIbI' muHotchoH yIQ vay' !
*vay' yIQ* or even better: *yIQwI'* **
ghIq jIleghmeH nachwIj vItlhe'taH, 'ej ghIch yIQ vItu' !
*vItlhe'lI'* would work so much better here. On 11/23/2016 10:11 AM, mayqel qunenoS wrote:
ben law', jIHaDmeH yotlhmajDaq vIjaH.
pa', jIpawta'DI' wa'DIch quSlabDaq jIba' 'ej ghIq jIHaDchoH..
'ach, pIj qaS wanI'vam Huj:
jIHaDchoHta'DI', 'ej jIbuS 'e' vInID, pay' wab vIQoychoH. Huj wabvam 'ej tlhaQ: *sniff* *sniff* *sniiiif*..
'ej SIbI' muHotchoH yIQ vay' !
wa'DIch jIQub: qaStaH nuq jay' ? ghIq jIleghmeH nachwIj vItlhe'taH, 'ej ghIch yIQ vItu' ! mularghtaH vavwI' dog..
toH, ngugh dogvaD jIjatlh: *hey* maqoch.. Doch qaq DaqaSnISmoHbogh tu'be'lu''a' ? be' dog DaSam DaneHbe''a' ?
'ej ghIq - Do' -, jIHvo' tlheD dog..
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