{mej} with and without {-vo'}
In the Saarbrücken qepHom'a' 2019 booklet, Dr. Okrand answered this question about {mej}: Lieven: What is the difference between {mej} "leave" and {tlheD} "depart"? MO: They certainly overlap, but, generally speaking, {tlheD} implies setting out on a journey, having a goal or destination in mind, while {mej} refers simply to leaving one's current location. In both cases, the object is the place you're departing/leaving from. (end of reply) While revising the paq'batlh, in discussing how {mej} is used with Dr. Okrand (the context is p. 163 line 4 in the 1st edition, which said {chalqachlIjvo' bImej...} and which should be {... Damej...}), I brought up the object of {mej}, gave him the existing example of {bIghHa' DamejDI' pagh QaS yInob} "Get out of jail free" (or literally, "when you leave jail, give zero troops") from Klingon Monopoly, and asked whether {-vo'} is necessary on {chalqachlIj[vo'] Damej...}. Here's what he wrote back: MO:
Good catch. Both ways are okay, but the {-vo’} is not needed here.
{mej} without {-vo’} implies you’re no longer in a place where you’ve been. (You were in jail, but now you’re not.) {mej} with {-vo’} is used when the place you’re leaving from (the place with the {-vo’}) is a starting point. You intend to journey from that point to some other point. (“The hikers left from the trailhead” suggests they began their hike on the trail. If you said “the hikers left the trailhead” — no {-vo’} — they may or may not have started hiking on the trail. Maybe they just got hungry and went home.) In addition to the {chalqachlIjvo’} example you cite, the paq’batlh has examples of {mej} with and without a preceding {-vo’}: (a) {lojmItmeyvo’ Damejta’} “you left from the gates” (p. 193, line 11). Kahless didn’t really spend any time at the gates — he went right through/past them and made it into Gre’thor without being harmed (well, he had to trick Fek’lhr, so it’s not like he did nothing). So Kotar is saying that Kahless got into Gre’thor from Gre’thor’s starting point so to speak (the gates), not that he escaped from the gates or something like that. So {-vo’} makes sense here. (b) {ghe’tor Da’elmo’ ’ej Damejmo’} “because you entered and left Gre’thor} (p. 195, line 26) Here there’s no place noun immediately preceding {Damejmo’}, but if there were (and there certainly could be), it would be {ghe’tor}, not {ghe’torvo’}. Kahless was in Gre’thor for a bit and then he wasn’t anymore — he left. So no {-vo’} is needed. The “to {-vo’} or not to {-vo’}” distinction isn’t as clear-cut as I may have made it sound. It’s subtle. You can be in a place for a while and then leave it and start your journey from that point. In many (most?) situations, you could use it or not and still be fine. But as a rule of thumb: If the focus is on not being somewhere anymore, no need for {-vo’}; if the focus is on starting from a certain place towards a certain path or goal, {-vo’} makes that clear. (end of message) So, to summarise: {tlheD} - implies a goal or destination {mej} without {-vo'} - just leaving a place {mej} with {-vo'} - the place marked with {-vo'} is a starting point -- De'vID
Couldn't all this apply for {tlhej} too? vaS'a' tlheD HoD the captain leaves the great hall (the great hall isn't the starting point) vaS'a'vo' tlheD HoD the captain leaves from the great hall (the great hall is the starting point) Or do the words of 'oqranD apply only to {mej}? -- Dana'an https://sacredtextsinklingon.wordpress.com/ Ζεὺς ἦν, Ζεὺς ἐστίν, Ζεὺς ἔσσεται· ὦ μεγάλε Ζεῦ
I wouldn’t make assumptions about the location/object of {tlheD} based on {mev}. The nuanced difference between the verbs might also have differences in terms of the presence or absence of {-vo’}. Meanwhile, if you want to use {tlheD} you have to arbitrarily decide whether to use {-vo’} or not, and you could use this as a guideline, since it is a decision you are forced to make without other guidance. All I’m saying is that you can definitely take this as advice on whether to use a {-vo’} or not with the noun in front of {tlheD}. You just can’t know that you are right until we’re told so. It’s reasonable to write some original Klingon sentences with {tlheD} and place or omit {-vo’} to the best guess you can make. It’s less reasonable to notate your personal dictionary or grammar rules to claim that this is officially true. pItlh charghwI’ ‘utlh (ghaH, ghaH, -Daj)
On May 24, 2022, at 5:19 AM, D qunen'oS <mihkoun@gmail.com> wrote:
Couldn't all this apply for {tlhej} too?
vaS'a' tlheD HoD the captain leaves the great hall (the great hall isn't the starting point)
vaS'a'vo' tlheD HoD the captain leaves from the great hall (the great hall is the starting point)
Or do the words of 'oqranD apply only to {mej}?
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Ok, charghwI', thanks for sharing your thoughts. I decided that until we get any further clarification (yeah right, as if that's ever gonna happen..), I'll be applying to {tlheD} too all this crap which goes for {mej} regarding its' use with or without the {-vo'}. And the reason I came to this decision is because that's how I like it. Charming isn't it? Also, reading the original post, I noticed this Ca'Non sentence: {lojmItmeyvo’ Damejta’} This sentence shows that a {-vo'}ed noun *can* be the object of a verb, something which -for reasons I don't know- I was under the impression that wasn't possible. Perhaps because I could never come up with an example where it would be necessary for a {-vo'}ed noun to be the object of a verb. Who knows? Go figure. -- Dana'an https://sacredtextsinklingon.wordpress.com/ Ζεὺς ἦν, Ζεὺς ἐστίν, Ζεὺς ἔσσεται· ὦ μεγάλε Ζεῦ
The full sentence in case it hasn’t been given yet: ghe'tor Da'elta' 'ej lojmItmeyvo' Damejta' 'ach bIrIQbe'mo' SoH neH Since you are the only one who ever entered Gre'thor, and left the gates unharmed (PB) There’s another sentence in paq’batlh contrasting {‘el} with {mej} without {-vo’}: vavlI' loDnI'lI' je DaSammeH ghe'tor Da'elmo' 'ej Damejmo' QeHchoH qa'pu' vaj lubIjlu' They will pay for the anger you caused by entering and leaving Gre'thor in search of your kin. (PB) Note the poetic parallelism in both: {Da’elta’ ‘ej … Damejta’} and {Da’elmo’ ‘ej Damejmo’}. (Interesting but irrelevant to the issue of whether or not to add {-vo’}.) -- Voragh _________________________________________________ From: D qunen'oS Also, reading the original post, I noticed this Ca'Non sentence: {lojmItmeyvo’ Damejta’} This sentence shows that a {-vo'}ed noun *can* be the object of a verb, something which -for reasons I don't know- I was under the impression that wasn't possible. Perhaps because I could never come up with an example where it would be necessary for a {-vo'}ed noun to be the object of a verb. Who knows? Go figure. -- Dana'an https://sacredtextsinklingon.wordpress.com/<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/sacredtextsinklingon.wordpress.com/__;!!BpyFHLRN4TMTrA!8y3YkHE8UDKU5PpVvBLn0N2Z1NfL2As6Bz5vy5DGIWFQqPTvJNT-2Q1wzeYWEhWiwui5Wjg7uolJnaBFOiA$> Ζεὺς ἦν, Ζεὺς ἐστίν, Ζεὺς ἔσσεται· ὦ μεγάλε Ζεῦ
I noticed the same thing. It is strange to have the prefix suggest an object that has a Type 5 suffix (except {-‘e’} because, hey, {-'e’} is soooo exceptional). It’s more typical to say {bIQtIqDaq jIghoS} or {bIQtIq vIghoS} than {bIQtIqDaq vIghoS}. I’m sure it can be perfectly justified. I just don’t see myself writing a sentence that does that. Perhaps some time in the future, there will be a circumstance when I’ll change my mind about that, but I don’t foresee it, nor am I especially interested in hearing an explanation of that case. It mostly seems, I don’t know, sloppy, kind of like tossing {tlhonmey} into a sentence with no poetic context. Sure, you can do it. It’s just weird, even if Okrand does it. One might expect a parallel between the use of {-Daq} with its special verbs and {-vo’} with its special verbs. Again, I’d tend to use the prefix indicating the object when there is no Type 5, and use the prefix indicating no object when there is a Type 5 suffix, but that’s just me. I’m not saying I’m right. I’m just saying that’s how I speak Klingon, and there’s no reason anybody shouldn’t understand that, if they generally understand Klingon. Hey, if they can understand Morskan, they can understand me, and I’m more interested in being understood than I am in being in the know of the most arcane corners of Klingon grammar that are of sufficiently limited utility that it’s not worth the effort to keep up. pItlh charghwI’ ‘utlh (ghaH, ghaH, -Daj)
On May 25, 2022, at 9:43 AM, Steven Boozer <sboozer@uchicago.edu> wrote:
The full sentence in case it hasn’t been given yet:
ghe'tor Da'elta' 'ej lojmItmeyvo' Damejta' 'ach bIrIQbe'mo' SoH neH Since you are the only one who ever entered Gre'thor, and left the gates unharmed (PB)
There’s another sentence in paq’batlh contrasting {‘el} with {mej} without {-vo’}:
vavlI' loDnI'lI' je DaSammeH ghe'tor Da'elmo' 'ej Damejmo' QeHchoH qa'pu' vaj lubIjlu' They will pay for the anger you caused by entering and leaving Gre'thor in search of your kin. (PB)
Note the poetic parallelism in both: {Da’elta’ ‘ej … Damejta’} and {Da’elmo’ ‘ej Damejmo’}. (Interesting but irrelevant to the issue of whether or not to add {-vo’}.)
-- Voragh _________________________________________________ From: D qunen'oS
Also, reading the original post, I noticed this Ca'Non sentence:
{lojmItmeyvo’ Damejta’}
This sentence shows that a {-vo'}ed noun *can* be the object of a verb, something which -for reasons I don't know- I was under the impression that wasn't possible. Perhaps because I could never come up with an example where it would be necessary for a {-vo'}ed noun to be the object of a verb. Who knows? Go figure.
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On 5/25/2022 10:18 AM, Will Martin wrote:
I noticed the same thing. It is strange to have the prefix suggest an object that has a Type 5 suffix (except {-‘e’} because, hey, {-'e’} is soooo exceptional). It’s more typical to say {bIQtIqDaq jIghoS} or {bIQtIq vIghoS} than {bIQtIqDaq vIghoS}.
The object of the verb *ghoS* is the course being followed, possibly a course identified by its destination. That is, its object is already locative anyway, so there is no reason one /couldn't/ add a *-Daq* to it. As TKD says, doing this is a little redundant, but not wrong. When a verb makes its object locative, adding the locative suffix doesn't change anything at all about the sentence. And by the way, the gloss of *ghoS* also includes "go away from." I have no doubt that you could say things like *bIQtIqvo' vIghoS*/I go away from the river./ *ghoS* can impart an ablative meaning to its object instead of a locative meaning, so we should not be surprised if adding the ablative suffix to the object has no effect on the sentence besides being redundant. This idea that objects should never have type 5 suffixes on them except for *-'e'* because it's exceptional and except for *-Daq* on certain verbs because the verbs are exceptional is a kludge made up by us, not Okrand. A more accurate "rule" would be that type 5 noun suffixes can go on any subject or object provided the verb supports locative/ablative/benefactive/causative/focus nouns in those positions. The role of focus is universal. A bunch of verbs support a locative object. A couple appear to support an ablative object. We know of none that support benefactive or causative objects or or any sort of subject other than a focus noun. The rule is not that subjects and objects cannot take type 5 suffixes; the rule is that nouns that aren't subject or objects come before the object and usually have type 5 suffixes. (Examples of nouns that aren't subject or object and don't have type 5 suffixes are time expressions.) There is no prohibition on putting type 5'd nouns on subjects or objects, and we're explicitly given instances where *-Daq* (and now *-vo'*) go on objects.
Sure, you can do it. It’s just weird, even if Okrand does it.
Only if you presume a rule that TKD doesn't actually state. This is one of those "we made ourselves think this way" things.
One might expect a parallel between the use of {-Daq} with its special verbs and {-vo’} with its special verbs.
The verbs are only special in that their objects are locations. You *ghoS* a location because *ghoS* is all about acting upon a location, so it's really not surprising when you put the location marker on the location you *ghoS.* -- SuStel http://trimboli.name
SuStel:
And by the way, the gloss ofghoSalso includes "go away from." I have no doubt that you could say things likebIQtIqvo' vIghoSI go away from the river.ghoScan impart an ablative meaning to its object instead of a locative meaning, so we should not be surprised if adding the ablative suffix to the object has no effect on the sentence besides being redundant.
Is there evidence that ghoS can add the ablative meaning to its object? ghoS is used tens of times in canon and every time its object doesn't have any type-5 suffix it means "go (to)". When ghoS is used to mean "go away from", it has -vo':
chaH neH wovmoHlu'be' chaH 'emvo' ghoS SuvwI'pu' mangghomyoH
The sun shone not on them only, Behind them came An army of brave warriors.
(paq'batlh)
Based on the evidence we have I don't think we can say that a nominative object could have an ablative meaning. I think the definition just means that in some contexts (ie. when -vo' is used), the verb can be translated with "go away from". Iikka "fergusq" Hauhio ------- Original Message ------- On Wednesday, May 25th, 2022 at 17.41, SuStel <sustel@trimboli.name> wrote:
On 5/25/2022 10:18 AM, Will Martin wrote:
I noticed the same thing. It is strange to have the prefix suggest an object that has a Type 5 suffix (except {-‘e’} because, hey, {-'e’} is soooo exceptional). It’s more typical to say {bIQtIqDaq jIghoS} or {bIQtIq vIghoS} than {bIQtIqDaq vIghoS}.
The object of the verb ghoS is the course being followed, possibly a course identified by its destination. That is, its object is already locative anyway, so there is no reason one couldn't add a -Daq to it. As TKD says, doing this is a little redundant, but not wrong. When a verb makes its object locative, adding the locative suffix doesn't change anything at all about the sentence.
And by the way, the gloss of ghoS also includes "go away from." I have no doubt that you could say things like bIQtIqvo' vIghoS I go away from the river. ghoS can impart an ablative meaning to its object instead of a locative meaning, so we should not be surprised if adding the ablative suffix to the object has no effect on the sentence besides being redundant.
This idea that objects should never have type 5 suffixes on them except for -'e' because it's exceptional and except for -Daq on certain verbs because the verbs are exceptional is a kludge made up by us, not Okrand. A more accurate "rule" would be that type 5 noun suffixes can go on any subject or object provided the verb supports locative/ablative/benefactive/causative/focus nouns in those positions. The role of focus is universal. A bunch of verbs support a locative object. A couple appear to support an ablative object. We know of none that support benefactive or causative objects or or any sort of subject other than a focus noun.
The rule is not that subjects and objects cannot take type 5 suffixes; the rule is that nouns that aren't subject or objects come before the object and usually have type 5 suffixes. (Examples of nouns that aren't subject or object and don't have type 5 suffixes are time expressions.) There is no prohibition on putting type 5'd nouns on subjects or objects, and we're explicitly given instances where -Daq (and now -vo') go on objects.
Sure, you can do it. It’s just weird, even if Okrand does it.
Only if you presume a rule that TKD doesn't actually state. This is one of those "we made ourselves think this way" things.
One might expect a parallel between the use of {-Daq} with its special verbs and {-vo’} with its special verbs.
The verbs are only special in that their objects are locations. You ghoS a location because ghoS is all about acting upon a location, so it's really not surprising when you put the location marker on the location you ghoS.
-- SuStel http://trimboli.name
On 5/26/2022 11:07 AM, Iikka Hauhio wrote:
SuStel:
And by the way, the gloss of*ghoS*also includes "go away from." I have no doubt that you could say things like*bIQtIqvo' vIghoS*/I go away from the river./*ghoS*can impart an ablative meaning to its object instead of a locative meaning, so we should not be surprised if adding the ablative suffix to the object has no effect on the sentence besides being redundant.
Is there evidence that *ghoS* can add the ablative meaning to its object? *ghoS* is used tens of times in canon and every time its object doesn't have any type-5 suffix it means "go (to)".
Perhaps you missed the qualifiers I sprinkled in liberally to avoid someone challenging me to prove what I was saying. "I have no doubt." "We should not be surprised if."
When *ghoS* is used to mean "go away from", it has *-vo'*:
*chaH neH wovmoHlu'be' * *chaH 'emvo' ghoS * *SuvwI'pu' mangghom **yoH*
/The sun shone not on them only, / /Behind them came / /An army of brave warriors. /
(paq'batlh)
I believe that every time *ghoS* is used to mean "go away from," it is ambiguous whether the ablative is the object or not. And even if it's not, that just goes along with all those times *jaH* fails to make its locative destination the object.
Based on the evidence we have I don't think we can say that a nominative object could have an ablative meaning. I think the definition just means that in some contexts (ie. when *-vo'* is used), the verb can be translated with "go away from".
I didn't say the evidence shows what I said. I said I wouldn't be surprised if it were the case. The casualness with which *mej* can take a *-vo'* noun as its object doesn't strike me as *mej* being exceptional; it strikes me as a special connotation of something that might not be terribly remarkable. -- SuStel http://trimboli.name
On Thu, May 26, 2022 at 11:07 AM Iikka Hauhio <fergusq@protonmail.com> wrote:
When *ghoS* is used to mean "go away from", it has *-vo'*:
*chaH neH wovmoHlu'be'*
*chaH 'emvo' ghoS* *SuvwI'pu' mangghom **yoH*
*The sun shone not on them only,*
*Behind them came*
*An army of brave warriors.*
(paq'batlh)
I don't see a "go away from" meaning there. I see a "go/proceed" and I see
a context-setting "from behind them", but they don't combine for me the way you seem to be treating it. My interpretation of this text is that *ghoS *has its typical meaning of "move along a path", with an implied destination here of *chaH*. Notice the English version of the passage uses the word "came", not "went away from". The phrase *chaH 'emvo'* does indicate the direction from which the army approached, but they *came* from there. They didn't *go away from* there. (Okay, perhaps they literally did, but that's not the point of the sentence.)
Based on the evidence we have I don't think we can say that a nominative object could have an ablative meaning. I think the definition just means that in some contexts (ie. when *-vo'* is used), the verb can be translated with "go away from".
We certainly cannot conclude from what we know that an object with *-vo'* *must* be allowed by Klingon grammar. But if you're going to translate *X-vo' ghoS* as *go away from X* with the "from" embedded in the verb instead of being part of the location, you're already treating *X* as the verb's object even as it bears the *-vo'* suffix*.* -- ghunchu'wI'
On Wed, May 25, 2022 at 8:15 AM D qunen'oS <mihkoun@gmail.com> wrote:
Also, reading the original post, I noticed this Ca'Non sentence:
{lojmItmeyvo’ Damejta’}
This sentence shows that a {-vo'}ed noun *can* be the object of a verb, something which -for reasons I don't know- I was under the impression that wasn't possible. Perhaps because I could never come up with an example where it would be necessary for a {-vo'}ed noun to be the object of a verb. Who knows? Go figure.
The object of {Damejta'} in this sentence is {ghe'tor}. Don't try to read so much into something when you aren't paying attention to the context. -- ghunchu'wI'
On Tue, May 24, 2022 at 12:04 PM Will Martin <lojmitti7wi7nuv@gmail.com> wrote:
I wouldn’t make assumptions about the location/object of {tlheD} based on {mev}. The nuanced difference between the verbs might also have differences in terms of the presence or absence of {-vo’}.
The distinction of {-vo}/no {-vo} with the verb {mej} is the implication of setting out from a place for a journey to another place (vs. just not being somewhere anymore). That implication is already built into the verb {tlheD}, so I don't see a way for it to accommodate the same distinction. -- ghunchu'wI'
ghunchu'wI':
The object of {Damejta'} in this sentence is {ghe'tor}. Don't try to read so much into something when you aren't paying attention to the context.
Ok, you got me. Indeed, I payed no attention to the context, because Klingon crap sickens me. As simple as that. I just couldn't care less about what qeylIS did or didn't do, about the gates of ghe''or, about molor, or anything related. As far as I'm concerned, the questions after all this are simply these two: 1. If we want to talk about leaving a place which is considered to be a starting point, then does the starting point which has been marked by the {-vo'} need to be the object of the verb or not? Do we say {juHvo' vImejpu'} or {juHvo' jImejpu'}? 2. Does the info which regards {mej} and its' use with {-vo'} apply for {tlhej} as well? As far as the first question goes, I think that since 'oqranD has already said that the place one's leaving or departing from is the object, and then elaborated on which is the case where we'd use {-vo'} as well, then putting two and two together, the conclusion must be that the {-vo}'ed noun must still be the object. In the message shared by De'vID, 'oqranD didn't change anything he previously had said; he just added something new. Personally, I'd prefer it if this wasn't the case, and we just needed to write {juHvo' jImejpu'}, for the simple reason that that's how we do it in Greek. But -speaking for myself- I think that if I did it that way, I'd break the rule about the place one's leaving or departing from needing to be the object. Thinking about the second question, I think that all this goes for {tlheD} as well, for the simple reason that 'oqranD wrote "if the focus is on starting from a certain place towards a certain path or goal, {-vo’} makes that clear". So -as we say on Vulcan- logic dictates that since one can use {tlheD} too and still be able to focus on "starting from a certain place", then someone can/must use the {-vo'} as in the case of {mej}. Of course, all this is just my opinion, and as usual we need to break out the ouija board to find out what it is that 'oqranD actually means/wants/instructs. And on second thought ouija board isn't enough on its' own; apparently what is needed is a whole divination ritual. Also, I'd like to add that 'oqranD has the habit of using examples where the verb prefixes don't make clear how things work. Perhaps someone should bring to his attention that we'd be saved much trouble speculating, if he avoided doing that. But on the other hand, how would we then practice our divination skills? Yeah, that must be it.. -- Dana'an https://sacredtextsinklingon.wordpress.com/ Ζεὺς ἦν, Ζεὺς ἐστίν, Ζεὺς ἔσσεται· ὦ μεγάλε Ζεῦ
On Thu, 26 May 2022 at 14:42, D qunen'oS <mihkoun@gmail.com> wrote:
As far as I'm concerned, the questions after all this are simply these two:
1. If we want to talk about leaving a place which is considered to be a starting point, then does the starting point which has been marked by the {-vo'} need to be the object of the verb or not? Do we say {juHvo' vImejpu'} or {juHvo' jImejpu'}?
I'll ask Dr. Okrand to clarify this, since it might affect the final version of the lines with {mej} in the 2nd edition of the paq'batlh.
2. Does the info which regards {mej} and its' use with {-vo'} apply for {tlhej} as well?
I'll ask him this too, but he's prioritising questions relevant to the publication of the paq'batlh so you might not get an answer until later. -- De'vID
I've asked Dr. Okrand for clarification about {mej}. In posting our conversations, I've had to summarise and make some edits (always in [brackets]), because the back-and-forth was long and threaded and sometimes when we refer back to "the second option" or whatever it isn't clear without context. I can't quote everything and have to make cutoffs somewhere. I now realise that I had made an error in summarising the situation in my previous message. Dr. Okrand has also gone back and realised that he had misread something. But it's fortunate that I posted to the mailing list, because y'all are very sharp-eyed and it's better to catch errors before the paq'batlh is out than afterwards. For that, I thank you. DopDaq qul yIchenmoH QobDI' ghu'. On Tue, 24 May 2022 at 11:08, De'vID <de.vid.jonpin@gmail.com> wrote:
MO:
Good catch. Both ways are okay, but the {-vo’} is not needed here.
The error I made in my summary was this: I presented the options as {chalqachlIjvo' Damej} vs. {chalqachlIj Damej}. Looking over the thread, Dr. Okrand's "both ways" was just referring to with and without {-vo'}, and {chalqachlIjvo' bImej} was what he'd actually intended by "without". (The *original* line in the 1st edition had said {chalqachlIjvo' bImej}, and his reply was comparing that against the suggested revision of {chalqachlIj Damej}.) However, he hadn't explicitly said {chalqachlIjvo' Damej} was wrong. The way that he'd written about {lojmItmeyvo' Damejta'} suggested that {lojmitmeyvo'} might've been the object of {Damejta'}. He's acknowledged in his reply to me that this was unclear, and has clarified things below. De'vID:
[snip summary of situation] So {chalqachlIj Damejpu'} is correct (if the tower is not your starting point). But when used with {-vo'}, should it be: {chalqachlIjvo' bImejpu'} (with the no-object prefix) or {chalqachlIjvo' Damejpu'} (with the object of {mej} marked with {-vo'})?
MO:
It should be {chalqachlIjvo' bImejpu'}.
De'vID: In the first example you cite, {lojmItmeyvo’ Damejta’} “you left from the gates” (p. 193, line 11), what's the object of {Damejta'}? [Here I give two different possible readings of the entire passage, only partly quoted below because the full quote is just a breakdown of p. 193 lines 11-13.] De'vID: [option 1: {ghe'tor} is the object] {ghe'tor Da'elta' 'ej lojmItmeyvo' ghe'tor Damejta'} "you... entered Gre'thor, and left Gre'thor from the gates" MO:
After re-reading the story, I realize I misinterpreted what was going on (in the story, not in the grammar necessarily). I should have said something like "Kahless didn't really spend any time at the gates — he went right through/past them and, after doing what he did in Gre'thor, went through/past the gates again on his way out of Gre'thor without being harmed. So Kotar is describing all of this, for better or worse, by referencing Gre'thor's checkpoint as an exit point rather than simply saying Kahless left."
I think [this reading where {ghe'tor} is the object] is right. De'vID: [option 2: {lojmItmeyvo'} is the object] TKD says that if the locative suffix {-Daq} is used with verbs whose meaning include locative notions, it's redundant but not wrong. (TKD also says that {-vo'} is similar to {-Daq}.) So in {lojmItmeyvo' Damejta'} the object of {Damejta'} could be {lojmItmeyvo'}, without contradicting TKD. MO:
TKD does say that about {-Daq}, but it's more complex than the quickie explanation there. Fortunately, for purposes of finishing up the paq'batlh, it doesn't matter right now.
De'vID: The issue here is that the English isn't clear. Does "entered Gre'thor, / And left the gates unharmed" mean only that Kahless entered Gre'thor unharmed, or that Kahless entered *and left* Gre'thor unharmed? MO:
Right. The English passage isn't clear all by itself. But in the context of the story, I think it means that Kahless entered Gre'thor, did whatever he did there, and then left Gre'thor and went on his way fit as a {ngItHel}. Kotar seems to be suggesting that before Kahless did this, others had tried to get in and out of Gre'thor but either failed or were harmed in the process (sustaining their injuries either deep in Gre'thor or at the gates on the way out… or maybe after being caught by the pursuing Qempa'keh).
De'vID: About the second example you cite, {ghe’tor Da’elmo’ ’ej Damejmo’} “because you entered and left Gre’thor} (p. 195, line 26), you wrote: "[snip full quote] So no {-vo’} is needed." If no {-vo'} is needed, then {ghe'tor Damejmo'} is correct. But if {-vo'} had been needed, would the correct sentence have been {ghe'torvo' bImejmo'} or {ghe'torvo' Damejmo'}? MO:
{ghe'torvo' bImejmo'}
[Here follows a discussion about what changes we should send to the editors, in light of this update.] De'vID: [By the way, does] what you wrote about {-vo'} applies to {tlheD} as well as {mej}? [Here, I quote p. 85, lines 10-13] Should it be {ghe'torvo' tlheD} or {ghe'tor tlheD}? MO:
I think for the paq'batlh, we should change the line to {ghe'tor 'el nuv qoj ghe'tor mej ghaH}.
I think this is better for two reasons: (1) Vocabulary: Using {mej} rather than{tlheD} makes the sentence match the later pairings of {'el} and {mej} on pp. 193 and 195 (all three referring to the same event). (2) Grammar/style: In this passage, it's more interesting stylistically (maybe even poetically) if the two parts of the sentence are similar, that is, if the nouns preceding the verbs are grammatically the same (neither has a suffix). And, as a bonus, it matches p. 195 and maybe p. 193, depending on what we decide to do there. I realize this doesn't answer the question about {tlheD} and {-vo'}, but first things (paq'batlh revisions) first. De'vID: Thanks for clarifying this. MO:
I'm not sure that I did!
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