On 6/17/2016 12:20 PM, mayqel qunenoS wrote:
{qaStaHvIS jar bIr, jIHvaD pagh qay'wI' tu'lu'. 'a qaSchoHtaHvISDI' jar tuj, ghe''or rur yaHwIj}.
My intended meaning was "while the cold months were happening, for me there was no problem, but while the hot months begun to happen my office resembled hell".
Ouch! You've got two type 9 suffixes on that second *qaS,* and most of those suffixes aren't necessary anyway. Does your office resemble Hell only when the hot months /start/ to happen? Does it resemble Hell /at the time/ the hot months happen? No, it resembles Hell /while/ the hot months happen. Use only *qaStaHvIS.* You can also improve the bit with *qay'* like so: *qaStaHvIS jarmey bIr jIHvaD qay'be'*/during the cold months, they [the cold months] were not a problem for me./ Without an indication to the contrary, it is most natural to assume the subject of the first clause is also the elided subject of the second clause. -- SuStel http://trimboli.name