On 8/22/2016 8:18 AM, mayqel qunenoS wrote:
ben law' dog vIghajpu' 'ej dogvamvaD *spitha* vIpongta'. (qulHomvaD 'elaDya' mu' 'oH *spitha*'e').
Your use of aspect has been turning into tense lately. Be careful! As far as your story goes, you didn't complete having a dog many years ago. *ben law' */dog/ *vIghaj* /many years ago I had a dog. /On the other hand, the aspect suffix on *vIpongta'* is appropriate.
motlh HatlhmajDaq vIpaw'DI' 'ej dogvetlh vIje'ta' 'ej vIqotlhta', 'oHvaD jIjatlhta':
You dropped the *-DI'* on those other dependent clauses. You also misspelled *paw*. *motlh HatlhmajDaq vIpawDI' 'ej */dog/*vetlh vIje'ta'DI' 'ej vIqotlhta'DI'* /usually when I arrived in our countryside and when I had fed that dog and when I had tickled it./ I probably would have put the *motlh* just before the *'oHvaD,* if I'm understanding your intention correctly.
Hatlhvam Dalegh'a' *spitha* ? puHvam.. Sormeyvam.. wa' jaj Hoch Daghaj !
QInlIj tlhaQlaw'ghach vIyajbe'. -- SuStel http://trimboli.name