ben law' dog vIghajpu' 'ej dogvamvaD *spitha* vIpongta'. (qulHomvaD 'elaDya' mu' 'oH *spitha*'e').
Your use of aspect has been turning into tense lately. Be careful!
As far as your story goes, you didn't complete having a dog many
years ago. ben law' dog vIghaj many
years ago I had a dog. On the other hand, the aspect suffix
on vIpongta' is appropriate.
motlh HatlhmajDaq vIpaw'DI' 'ej dogvetlh vIje'ta' 'ej vIqotlhta', 'oHvaD jIjatlhta':
You dropped the -DI' on those other dependent clauses. You also misspelled paw. motlh HatlhmajDaq vIpawDI' 'ej dogvetlh vIje'ta'DI' 'ej vIqotlhta'DI' usually when I arrived in our countryside and when I had fed that dog and when I had tickled it.
I probably would have put the motlh just before the 'oHvaD,
if I'm understanding your intention correctly.
Hatlhvam Dalegh'a' *spitha* ? puHvam.. Sormeyvam.. wa' jaj Hoch Daghaj !
QInlIj tlhaQlaw'ghach vIyajbe'.
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