14 Feb
2020
14 Feb
'20
10:58 a.m.
SuStel:
I hope you don't mind the criticism
By all means ! Not only do I not mind, but I encourage it. Unless someone is being corrected, how can he ever hope to improve ? SuStel:
it would help readability if you grouped your sentences in thematically related paragraphs
hmm.. Only now that you mentioned it, I realized that I tend to change line often, after a sentence/sentences. Of course you're right. Indeed it can be confusing, so I'll keep that in mind. ~ mayqel qunen'oS