SuStel:

> I hope you don't mind the criticism 

By all means ! Not only do I not mind, but I encourage it. Unless someone is being corrected, how can he ever hope to improve ?

SuStel:

> it would help readability if you grouped 

> your sentences in thematically related

> paragraphs 

hmm..

Only now that you mentioned it, I realized that I tend to change line often, after a sentence/sentences.

Of course you're right. Indeed it can be confusing, so I'll keep that in mind.

~ mayqel qunen'oS