4 Jul
2016
4 Jul
'16
3:30 p.m.
jatlh De'vID:
Gorbachev boq Lincoln; chen Gorkon.
wa' Gorkon chenmoH Lincoln 'ar? The canon sentence seems to have a dangling modifier, loghDaq. Out of context I'd read it, "All warriors are warriors who are ready to fight in space." But as the sentence is formed, {loghDaq} can't go anywhere else. Maybe a pause for emphasis after {loghDaq} would make it clear it's about the entire sentence, not just the relative clause. -- mIp'av yergho bu''a' baHwI' IKAV chuch 'etlh My modeling blog: http://bellerophon-modeler.blogspot.com/ My other modeling blog: http://bellerophon.blog.com/