SuStel:
Your translation, meaning no offense, is very choppy and difficult to read compared to the original.
No problem, 'amerI'qa' jupwI' ! I always want people correcting me, because without being corrected, how can someone ever improve ? SuStel:
Singular: Noldo, Vala Plural: Noldor, Valar
Good to know, thanks. SuStel:
tlhab 'ej jaq
Believe it or not, I'd totally forgotten that we had {jaq}. SuStel:
Vala chIwmeH, jIH nIv law' Valimar Valar Hem nIv puS
This somehow confuses me. If you'd written just {Vala'e' jIH nIv law' Valimar Valar Hem nIv puS}, I could understand it better. But why did you chose to add the {vala chIwmeH} ? SuStel:
puHvam langvo' vIqem
I thought of using {qem}, but I wondered whether by using it, it would give a meaning like "I will physically carry you". ~ cxcxcxx