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First, I’d recommend {vIHbe’meH qa’vIn} over {qa’vIn vIHMoHbe’lu’meH}
Yes, this is a good suggestion too. I didn't give much thought to whether I should use {vIHbe'meH} or {vIHmoHbe'lu'meH}. I just wrote the first thing which came to mind. SuStel:
I think this comes from your liberal splicing of parenthetical phrases in the middle of sentences
Indeed! In fact, what I was actually intending to write was: {HIvje' vIHmoHbe'lu'meH -vaj qa'vIn Qoy'moHbe'lu'meH- ngaDmoHwI' le' lo'lu'} But I must have gotten distracted by something and forgot the dashes.. Yes, I admit it.. Parenthetical phrases are to me the same thing, as a fish is to a cat. I just can't resist them. On a totally unrelated subject, do you get delivery reports for the messages you send to the list? I'm missing the delivery reports from yesterday, and today. -- Dana'an https://sacredtextsinklingon.wordpress.com/ Ζεὺς ἦν, Ζεὺς ἐστίν, Ζεὺς ἔσσεται· ὦ μεγάλε Ζεῦ