I have attempted a translation of another classical poem. This time, it's "The Second Coming", by William Butler Yeats. The version of the poem I used can be found here: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems-and-poets/poems/detail/43290 cha'DIch ghoS [1] Sachbogh ghoDaq tlhe'taHqu' 'oH. wamwI' QoylaHbe' wammeH bo'Degh. Sab Dochmey. ngaDlaHbe'taH botlh. qo'Daq chutmey Hutlhbogh nugh'e' 'uchHa'lu'. bIQ'a''e' HurghmoHbogh 'Iw 'uchHa'lu' 'ej Dat chuntaHghach tay SoD bIQ'a'. pagh Har nIvqu'wI'pu' 'ach pe'vIl nongqu' QIvqu'wI'pu'. tugh vay' 'anglu'bej. tugh cha'DIch ghoSbej. cha'DIch ghoS! mu'meyvetlh vIjatlhpu'DI' SIbI' mInDu'wIj Suj mIllogh'a''e' Delbogh qo' qa'. Deb voghDaq QIt 'uSDu'Daj vIHmoH vIghro''a' porgh loD nach je ghajbogh tu'qom. pagh lu'agh mInDu'Daj 'ej vupbe' bIH. jul lurur. Dechbogh retlhDajDaq jIr Deb bo'Deghmey QeH QIbmey. pumqa' QIb 'ach cha'SaD DIS poH QongwI' let najHa'moHpu' Qombogh ghu QongDaq DaH 'e' vISov. [2] 'ej tagha' repDaj lop Ha'DIbaH naQbe' 'ej boghmeH betle'HemDaq yItlI'. [3] [1] I'm basing this on the controversial canon from the SkyBox card where {wa'DIch} was used as an adverbial for "the first time". I wanted to keep the idea of "second" in the translation, because of the religious connotations of the "second coming", so I didn't use {ghoSqa'}. I didn't use something like {ghoSpu'ghach cha'DIch} since I wanted to avoid {-ghach} as much as possible (though I still ended up using it elsewhere). {cha'logh ghoS} suggests both comings, not just the second one. So I'm rolling the dice on the adverbial {-DIch}. [2] {Qom} isn't the right word here, but earthquakes at least fit the apocalyptic tone, and there's not much else to use. Maybe one of the airplane movement verbs? [3] I would appreciate any suggestions on how to better translate "slouch". {yIt} just doesn't seem to cut it.