jIH:
HoSbogh Suvqangbogh 'ej matlhbogh vay' SuStel: HoSbogh vay', Suvqangbogh, 'ej matlhbogh someone who is strong, willing to fight, and loyal
The reason you placed the {vay'} after the {HoSbogh} (instead of placing it at the end) is for added clarity, or is it wrong to place it at the end? jIH:
Quchbogh Do'bogh vay' 'ej quvmoHlu'bogh SuStel: The second one doesn't work like this because vay' is the subject of Quchbogh and Do'bogh but not of quvmoHlu'bogh. You have to split this into multiple phrases. Quchbogh vay' 'ej Do'bogh vIlegh. ghaH quvmoHlu' je. I see someone who is happy and fortunate. He/she is also honored.
I'm afraid I don't understand this. {Quchbogh Do'bogh vay' 'ej quvmoHlu'bogh} Can't this be understood as "someone who is happy, who is fortunate, and (he) is honored"? -- Dana'an https://sacredtextsinklingon.wordpress.com/ Ζεὺς ἦν, Ζεὺς ἐστίν, Ζεὺς ἔσσεται· ὦ μεγάλε Ζεῦ