[tlhIngan Hol] using an entire sao as a {-bogh} phrase

This isn't something I'd actually do, but I'm wondering whether it would be actually correct. I want to say "the officer who wants us to defect is a traitor". Or "the officer who plans that we defect is a traitor". So I write: maghwI' ghaH macheH neHbogh yaS'e' maghwI' ghaH macheH 'e' nabbogh yaS'e' Are the above correct? -- Dana'an https://sacredtextsinklingon.wordpress.com/ Ζεὺς ἦν, Ζεὺς ἐστίν, Ζεὺς ἔσσεται· ὦ μεγάλε Ζεῦ