13 Aug
2019
13 Aug
'19
1:58 p.m.
On 8/13/2019 12:20 PM, mayqel qunen'oS wrote:
chal tuDmoH 'engmey SISmoH rewve' reghmoH yav QommoH bIQtIqmey QaDchoHmoH ngengmey pubmoH bIQ'a'mey HajmoH naghmey bechmoH HuDmey DejmoH tera' SaQmoH pe'bIl'a' ghaH ghaHmo' SIH Hoch qIvDu' ghaHmo' jel Hoch qa'pu' ghaHmo' QIlchoH Hoch
Etc. I really like this use of repetition. I've always felt that rhyme had little place in Klingon poetry, since you usually just end up rhyming the same suffixes over and over again. What you've done here has not only repeated words or suffixes, but a repeated beat (with minor variations). I could see this being used in a march or fanfare. I imagine it chanted rather than put to music. -- SuStel http://trimboli.name