On Wed, Aug 17, 2016 at 12:33 PM, mayqel qunenoS <mihkoun@gmail.com> wrote:
Ha'DIbaH veb vIghaj reH vIneH:
On Thu, Aug 18, 2016 at 2:25 AM, mayqel qunenoS <mihkoun@gmail.com> wrote:
bIlugh ! mu'tlheghlIj mu'tlheghwIj je DInuDchugh vaj ngoD veb DItlhojbej :
You seem to have become fond of the verb {veb} "be next (in a series, sequence)". I don't think it means what you want it to. The first example says "I always want to have a subsequent animal." It is talking about the next animal in a sequence of animals, but you're obviously trying to refer to an animal you are going to describe in the next sentence. Though the intent is clear, the actual words don't quite get there. Before I got to the rest of the note, I was ready to find out what new animal you wanted to have in order to replace the previous one that you had. Similarly, the second example says {ngoD veb}, which made me wonder what prior fact was being implied and what new fact was being implied by the sequence. I think you've latched onto {veb} as a way to keep your unusual stylistic habit of putting a statement before its context. It isn't interfering much with the meaning, because you do explain everything quickly, and the misuse of the word can be recognized easily, but you should know that you're doing it and you should try to find a way to stop. -- ghunchu'wI'