[tlhIngan Hol] I'm also a beginner

*Luis* 'oH pongwIj'e'. 'op wen DaqvamDaq *SAO*, lIw mu'mey je bopbogh QInmey'e' vIghItlhpu'. 'eSpanya'ngan jIH, 'ach DoyIchlan vIDab. naDev 'eSpanya' Hol, DoyIchlan Hol je vIghojmoH. tlhIngan Hol vIparHa'qu'. vIghojtaH jIHvaD Dajqu'mo'. 'ach qeqbe'lu'chugh, ghojlu'chu'be'. vaj 'op tlhIngan Hol mu'tlhegh vIghItlh 'e' vInID. 'ej tlhIngan jIHbe'mo', jIjatlhlaH jIlujvIp! 'ach qaSchugh wanI'vam, vaj jIghojqu'laH. I would really appreciate any help / corrections in order to improve my klingon! Thank you very much!