Re: [tlhIngan Hol] at the outskirts of the city

this:

chut'a' pabHa'chu'meH vay', chut'a' pabHa'qangchu'pu' wa''e' neH.

is better written as:

chut'a' pabHa'chu'meH, chut'a' pabHa'qangchu'pu' wa''e' neH.

~ Qa'yIn