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As a general rule, if you wonder whether or not a Relative Clause can be stretched to do the thing you are considering doing with it, it would probably be better to make the Relative Clause a separate sentence, as SuStel has skillfully demonstrated.
I agree. Quoting with the way described in the original post is something I wouldn't choose either, since it felt weird from the start. Sometime ago you'd written something beautiful, which I still remember; you wrote something like (I don't remember the exact words..): "when I think in klingon my thoughts are colored by klingon." I don't know if I understand this the way you meant it to be understood, but I guess it means something like "one must think in klingon"/"one must develop a way to feel what actually sounds natural in klingon". And quoting that way doesn't sound natural. ~ lIr qIj