Thanks for all the replies. After a fair amount of time (read most of the day) trying all the different combinations I could think of, for the text to place between the {SeQpIr DalaDtaHvIS bIjeSchu'be',} and the {DalaDpu'pa'.} When I realised I was putting together long noun-phrases again (a sure sign I'm doing it wrong) I tried various options like: {ghItlhDaj Hol wa'DIch mu'mey} with a {tlhIngan Hol 'oH Holvam'e'.} appended after that sentence. or maybe: {tlhIngan Hol lo'taHvIS ghItlh qonpu'bogh} But those were a bit long-winded, so maybe: {tlhIngan Hol ghItlh qonpu'bogh} or maybe I'll finally settle on: {qonDI' tlhIngan Hol mu'mey lo'bogh}. Any preferences or interpretation / grammar errors? DaH HolDaj wa'DIch 'op mu'mey'e' qonpu'bogh SeQpIr vImuch: wa'leS, wa'leS, wa'leS, wa'leS'e' je; jajvo' jajDaq QIt Do ramqu' lengtaH, poH mu' Qav'e' qonlu'pu'bogh ghoStaH. 'ej qoHpu' wovmoHpu' Hoch wa'Hu'meymaj, Hegh lam ghoSDI'. yIHegh, yIHegh, weQ ngaj. yItbogh QIb 'oH neH yIn'e'. DawI' Do'Ha'; muchmeH ravDaq repDaj HemwI' Dabogh rejmorgh. 'ej ghIq, not Qoyqa'lu'. lut'e' 'oH. 'oH ja'pu' qoH. 'oH buy'moH QeH, wab je. 'ach pagh 'oS 'oH.