[tlhIngan Hol] law' puS with the -taHvIS and type-9 clauses preceding each element

There's the Ca'Non sentence: {QamvIS Hagh qaq law' torvIS yIn qaq puS}. Based on the above could we write something like the following? Suvlu'taHvIS batlh potlh law' yInlu'taHvIS tlhuH potlh puS honor while fighting is more important than breath while living or maybe even: SuvchoHlu'DI' batlh potlh law' yInchoHlu'DI' tlhuH potlh puS as soon as someone begins to fight honor is more important than breath as soon he begins to live Based on the Ca'Non {QamvIS Hagh qaq law' torvIS yIn qaq puS}, could I construct sentences as the above, or is the QamvIS Hegh.. some kind of "maltz-said-so-special-phrase-so-shut-up-and-don't-generalize" case? ~ Dana'an indeed, death while standing is preferable to life while kneeling