SuStel:
The norm is to put any subject or object on the first verb you can, then switch to pronouns and possibly elide those pronouns on subsequent verbs that continue to use the same subject and object.
As soon as this thread was finished, I started following your advice, and yes you're right, it made much more sense placing the subject (or object) on the first verb that I could. Until recently, I needed to write something like "the chancellor helps people who train and are willing to fight". So I wrote: qeqbogh nuvpu' 'ej Suvqangbogh QaH Qang I understand the reasons why the {nuvpu'} needs to be placed right after the {qeqbogh}, but it seems "strange" to see the {nuvpu'} -which is the object of {QaH} too- so far away from it. Doesn't it seem strange to you too? -- Dana'an https://sacredtextsinklingon.wordpress.com/ Ζεὺς ἦν, Ζεὺς ἐστίν, Ζεὺς ἔσσεται· ὦ μεγάλε Ζεῦ