[tlhIngan Hol] {-bogh} {-bogh}'ed nouns and {-taHvIS}

[mayqel qunen'oS]

I want to say:

"A god who protects women while they are giving birth"

So I write:

boghmoHtaHvIS be'pu' Qanbogh Qun'e'

Is this correct? Something seems strange but I can't understand what.

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Dana'an
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