[tlhIngan Hol] bIQ qoD Dujmaj SuD

[Daniel Dadap]

On Jun 4, 2018, at 10:26, SuStel <sustel at trimboli.name> wrote:

>> vengHomDaq jIboghpu'bogh,
>> bIQ'a' lengbogh loD tu'lu'.
>> maHvaD yInDaj lut nuja',
>> Daq bIQ Dujmey Hoch qaSpu'.
> 
> I don't understand this line.
> 

Which one, just the last one?

The intended meaning here was:

In the village where I was born, (Your feedback about “ship in which I fled” is acknowledged; I haven’t made any changes yet)
There was a mad who traveled (to?) the ocean.
He told us the story of his life,
Everything happened in the place of water ships.

Also, I know bIQ qoD Duj is probably a bit of a stretch for “submarine”, but it’s what I’m going with unless somebody has a clearer suggestion.
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