this:
23 >>> pelegh ! chorDajDaq yatlhchoH ngaghbe'taHwI', 'ej bogh wa' puqloD;
puqloDvamvaD *emmanuel* ponglu'. <<< nutlhej Qun, 'e' maq pongvam.

should be:
23 >>> pelegh ! chorDajDaq yatlhchoH ngaghbe'taHwI', 'ej bogh wa' puqloD;
puqloDvamvaD *emmanuel* ponglu'. <<< nutlhej Qun 'e' maq pongvam.

I removed the comma before the {'e' maq pongvam}

~ m. qunen'oS