two questions:

jIH:
> Daqvam chImDaq yInlaH mangghoH
> Sar nuq

is this correct for "what kind of army lives at this deserted place" ?

No. Unknown whether you can use nuq or 'Iv as part of a noun-noun construction.

Daqvam chIm Dabbogh mangghom Sar'e' yIngu'
identify the army-variety that inhabits this deserted place!

jIH:
> loDvaD lay'ta'bogh chaH

is this correct for "the man for whom they swore" ?

No. This is a variation of the old "ship in which I fled" problem. Short version: only the subject or object of a relative clause can be the head noun of the clause.

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