are these correct/acceptable ?

romuluSngan HoH 'Iv DaneH
who do you want to kill the romulan ?

'Iv HoH romuluSngan DaneH
who do you want the romulan to kill ?

romuluSngan HoH 'Iv 'e' Dalegh
who did you see that he killed the romulan ?

'Iv HoH romuluSngan 'e' Dalegh
who did you see to be killed by the romulan ?

nIn 'ar wIghaj DaneH
how much fuel do you want us to have ?

nIn 'ar wIghaj 'e' Dalegh
how much fuel did you see that we have ?

tagha'.. Qong qunnoH. DaH 'e' vIchaw'..

qunnoH jan puqloD
ghoghwIj HablI'vo' vIngeHta'