On Oct 19, 2017 15:19, "De'vID" <de.vid.jonpin@gmail.com> wrote:

On 19 October 2017 at 14:19, Joseph Bell <joble02@icloud.com> wrote:
Recently, I decided to start learning Klingon. As a practice, I started to translate the first few sentences of Sun Tzu’s the art of war.

I would say that translating a book isn't really the best way to practise a language you don't already know very well. ...

Was there more? Did you want to send a revision? I hope our comments did not scare you off. It was a good first effort, and everyone needs to iterate their understanding before they get the hang of things.

De'vID