Qo'noS romuluS je boSuqlaH. vabDot tera' Qejbogh DIvI' ram boSuqlaH.
kronos, romulus and even the puny federation's precious earth, are all up for grabs.

DaH jIghel:

based on the translation, shouldn't there be a {'e'} shoved up the end of {tera'} ? hmm ? shouldn't it ?

A disambiguating -'e' in a relative clause is always optional.

..and as if things weren't complicated enough, another catastrophe occured !

while writing the {HIja' vay'} for "someone tell me", I accidentally wrote {yIja'lu'}; however, as soon as I corrected it I was left to wonder.. what would that mean ? would that mean "someone (unspecified singular) tell him !" ?

I consider it nonsensical.

Remember, when you say HIja' vay', you're really saying HIja', vay' tell me, someone. You're using direct address; the vay' is not the subject of the sentence. Imperative sentences could even be said not to have subjects.

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