Am 24.04.2019 um 17:17 schrieb mayqel qunen'oS:

Would the following be correct ?

{jagh Duj Daq cha'meH la', yav DIjta'; DIjmeH 'IwDaj lo'ta'}

This is corect, although you should check if the usage of {-ta'} is
necessary here. If you are using it as a past tense, then it's not needed.

It's necessary if they're completed actions. If you're looking back on the situation and describing it as if it's already happened, then the perfective is necessary. If you're describing it as if you're in the middle of the action, you cannot use perfective. Either could be used here, depending on things like whether the teller is trying to set the stage for a story or simply relate past facts.

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