On 7/28/2020 9:05 AM, mayqel qunen'oS wrote:
Qap yuQDaj; Dun 'e' tulbogh nuv
his planet wins; the person who hopes that is great

(I placed the semicolon just to show how I understand the sentence)

Is there anything wrong with writing something like this ? I can't
think of any grammar rule(s) being broken.
The rule you're breaking is that the 'e' needs to refer to the previous sentence. You're trying to use it to refer to the previous but one sentence.
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