The {HIja'} was dubbed into {jIyI'}. Two different shots of the {'ej jIHvo' nIHDI' jIbup} sentence was dubbed into two different sentences!
1. {ghach jIvvo' naH.} [The {jIbup} part is cut off and not used.]
2. {'ej chIvo' neH chIw vum'e'.}
Combining this with my previous notes (see my message dated Sep. 8, 2017, with the subject "STID dialogue"), some of the re-dubbing was based on this previous version of the dialogue:
Uhura: Who is the leader?
{DevwI' ghaH 'Iv'e'?} -> {jIvuylaH. jIve'.}
Klingon: How do you know Klingon?
[not used]
Uhura: My romantic partner taught me.
{mughojmoH parmaqqaywI'.} -> {potlhmo' batlh, vIqawba'.}
Klingon: You mated with a Klingon?
{tlhIngan Dangaghpu''a' SoH?}
[not used]
Uhura: Yes, and when he stole from me I dumped him.
{HIja', 'ej jIHvo' nIHDI' jIbup.} -> {jIyI'.} {'ej chIvo' neH chIw vum'e'.} / {ghach jIvvo' naH.}
Uhura: To find him and take back my things, I have tracked him here.
{ghaH vISammeH 'ej DochmeywIj vItlhapqa'meH naDev vIghochpu'.}
-> [{ghaH vISammeH} is not used] {'ej Dojmey wID - vInDa'ma' peq.} [{-meH naDev vIghochpu'} is not used.]
Now he is hiding in the ruins of this city, a coward.
{DaH vengvam pIghDaq So''eghtaH. nuch.}
In the final version, this was shortened to {DaH pIghvamDaq So''eghtaH} to match the shorter timing. This change was hidden by Uhura's not being visible when it's spoken.
Klingon: You lie.
{bInep}
Uhura: Then kill me. I will certainly die with honour.
{vaj HIHoH. batlh jIHeghbej.}
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