jatlhchuqtaHvIs jupwI' jIH je, jIqIDpu', 'a tlhaQbe' qIDwIj 'e' noH jupwI'. “chay' tlhIngan Hol jatlhtaHvIS *facepalm* jatlhlu'” 'e' ghel ghaH. “qabwIj vIweq” vIjangpu', 'a jIloy neH.

jIghel: nuq jatlh tlhInganna', moghDI' ghaH?

jatlhlaw' ghuy'cha'! pagh va!

<jatlhchuqtaHvIS jupwI' jIH je>

jatlh doesn't take the person spoken to as a direct object, so you probably can't say jatlhchuq. One usually says ja'chuq, which appears in the dictionary. It's not entirely clear, though.

<chay' tlhIngan Hol jatlhtaHvIS facepalm jatlhlu'>

Don't insert the subordinate clause between the main clause and its question word. Also, keep your indefinite subject consistent throughout. tlhIngan Hol jatlhlu'taHvIS chay' facepalm jatlhlu'?

<'e' ghel ghaH>

Quotations can't be objects of anything but the verbs of saying jatlh or ja', and then must use the special rule that omits 'e'. To say someone asked something, say it in two separate sentences: someone asked; someone said... ghelpu' ghaH; <tlhIngan Hol jatlhlu'taHvIS chay' facepalm jatlhlu'?> jatlhpu'. This goes for answering as well: jIjangpu'; jIjatlhpu' <qabwIj vIweq>. If asked and answered aren't vital to what you're saying, you could just drop that part and just say someone said...

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