On Fri, Aug 11, 2017 at 9:49 AM, mayqel qunenoS <mihkoun@gmail.com> wrote:

All of these are indeed wonderful suggestions, but let me ask you something.

Is the original sentence {ghorgh DaH ghogh HablI' Dalo'bogh Daje' ?} grammatically correct ?

Can we have side by side {ghorgh} and {DaH} ? This has been the source of my confusion in the first place.

Why not? You're allowed to use adverbials in relative clauses, and {ghorgh} goes at the beginning of the main sentence. It may or may not be awkward but I see no reason it would be ungrammatical.