However let me ask you. What's your preference with regards to where to place the {nuvpu'} ? After the first {-bogh} (i.e. the {luHoHbogh}), or after the second {-bogh} (i.e. the {luHoHlaHbe'bogh}) ?

Of the two, I prefer porgh luHoHbogh nuvpu' 'ach qa' luHoHlaHbe'bogh tIbamvIpQo', because it introduces the subject of the verb HoH when it first appears and refers to it using an elided pronoun subsequently.

However, either is perfectly legal and acceptable.

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