tugh, Hargh SuvwI'pu'vam 'op SuvwI'

soon, some of these warriors will fight

tugh, Hargh SuvwI'pu'vam mI'

soon, a number of these warriors will fight

I feel that they are wrong, but I can't understand why.

Neither is correct.

tugh Hargh 'op SuvwI'vam
Soon some of these warriors will fight (a major confrontation).

SuvwI'pu'vam mI' means these warriors' number, the number of these warriors. Are they carrying a sign with an eight on it, and the sign is going to fight some other warriors' number in a duel?

Note that it's not clear whether it makes a difference whether it's 'op SuvwI'vam or 'op SuvwI'pu'vam.

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