<div dir="ltr"><div>So this is what I've decided on:</div><div><br></div><div> 'op vengmeyDaq qaSchoHpu' Daw'mey, ghIq vengmey law'Daq qaSchoHpu' je.<br></div><div><br></div><div>bI'reng</div></div><div class="gmail_extra"><br><div class="gmail_quote">On Tue, Sep 5, 2017 at 4:53 PM, Brent Kesler <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:brent.of.all.people@gmail.com" target="_blank">brent.of.all.people@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0 0 0 .8ex;border-left:1px #ccc solid;padding-left:1ex"><div dir="ltr"><div class="gmail_extra"><div class="gmail_quote"><span class="">On Tue, Sep 5, 2017 at 4:31 PM, De'vID <span dir="ltr"><<a href="mailto:de.vid.jonpin@gmail.com" target="_blank">de.vid.jonpin@gmail.com</a>></span> wrote:<br><blockquote class="gmail_quote" style="margin:0px 0px 0px 0.8ex;border-left:1px solid rgb(204,204,204);padding-left:1ex"><div dir="auto"><span class="m_-6062071059501604456gmail-"><div><div class="gmail_extra"><div class="gmail_quote"><br></div></div></div></span><div dir="auto">No, I read it only as "in (a/the) city and (the) cities", which is redundant.</div><div dir="auto"><br></div><div dir="auto">What's wrong with {ngIq veng}?</div></div></blockquote><div> </div><div><br></div></span><div>1. The canon examples of {ngIq} only give a rough idea of its precise usage, so...</div><div><br></div><div>2. I only risk {ngIq} when I'm confident what I'm saying fits one of the canon examples. I don't thank that's the case here. All the examples that fit the "one after another" usage seem to imply "all of them, one at a time", like checking items of a list. I think the phrase "city after city" is less about a sequence and more about the idea that revolutions kept breaking out <i>everywhere.</i></div><div><br></div><div>3. {ngIq vengDaq qaSchoHtaH Daw'mey} could mean that revolutions kept breaking out in a single city, like the Year of the Four Emperors. Or maybe the plural {Daw'mey} implies multiple cities. I'm not sure, because point number one.</div><div><br></div><div>But it looks like {vengDaq, vengmeyDaq je} isn't working, so I'll keep working on it.</div><div><br></div><div>bI'reng</div></div></div></div>
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