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<div class="moz-cite-prefix">On 12/7/2016 9:46 AM, mayqel qunenoS
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<p dir="ltr">ben puSqu', athens vIDabtaH..</p>
<p dir="ltr">pa' jIyIntaHvIS, tInmo' chuqmey, Hoch jaj puH DujwIj
vISeDtaH.</p>
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<p>I've noticed you overusing <b>-taH</b> recently. You haven't
technically been wrong in your use, but your meaning is probably
not exactly what you're writing.</p>
<p>Explain to me, for instance, the difference between <b>ben
puSqu' <i>Athens</i> vIDabtaH</b> and <b>ben puSqu' <i>Athens</i>
vIDab.</b> Also explain the difference between <b>Hoch jaj puH
DujwIj vISeDtaH</b> and <b>Hoch jaj puH DujwIj vISeD.</b><br>
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<p dir="ltr"> 'ach qen juH vengDaq vIcheghta' 'ej naDev mach
chuqmey.</p>
<p dir="ltr">machmo' chuqmeyvam, Dat vIjaHmeH jIyIt; puH Duj
vIlo'be'. DaH, chaq jatlhlu': QaQ ghu' ! nIn Dalo'nISbe' !</p>
<p dir="ltr">'a napbe' ghu'..</p>
<p dir="ltr">wa' ben, puH DujwIjDaq DIS leH ta'ta' jonwI'. 'ej
leHvam ta'ta'DI', mujatlh: pIjHa' puH Dujvam Dalo'ba'.. jIjang:
bIlugh; chay' ghu'vam DaSov. jatlh: puH Duj bIngDaq spidermey
tu'lu'.. jIjang: toH ! qay'wI' tu'lu''a'.</p>
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In the immortal words of William Strunk, "Omit needless words." Just
say <b>qay''a' vay'?</b><br>
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<p dir="ltr"> 'ej ghIq mujatlh: pIj puH Duj Dalo'be'chugh vaj
QapHa'choH Dujvetlh ! ..ghIq vIghel: vaj chay' jIvangnIS. 'ej
jatlh: Hoch Hogh wa'logh yISeD !</p>
<p dir="ltr">Hu'tegh ! ..jIHvaD vavwI' dogmey qawmoH ghu'vam !
Hoch jaj, vIQuchmoHmeH mayIttaH jIH bIH je.</p>
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<p><b><i>Dog</i> Doy'qu'moHlu'meH 'ej<i> </i>ghatlhlu'meH <i>dog</i>
yItmoHlu'. 'utbe' bel.</b><br>
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<p dir="ltr"> DaH, Hoch Hogh puH DujwIj vIvIHnISmoH je !</p>
<p dir="ltr">vaj dog rurchoH puH DujwIj.. ghu'vam vIparHa' !</p>
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<b>'ach <i>dog</i> DamuS qar'a'?<br>
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<p dir="ltr"> vIghro' rur DujwIj net jalchugh vaj qaq ghu'vam..
vIghro' rurchugh vIH'eghmoHlaH.</p>
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<p><b>'ej leng tIqDaq bISeDnISDI' DulobQo'bej 'ej not bIpaw.</b><br>
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