[tlhIngan Hol] to roar in crescendo with verbs

[mayqel qunen'oS]

Yesterday I wanted to say "no one really changes while getting older; with
the passage of time people just display more what they really are".

But when I came to the "with the passage of time people just display more
what they really are", the problem was that since I was writing this on
twitter, there was a character limit, so I needed to keep it short.

And it was then when the "roar in crescendo" Ca'Non came to mind: {beyHom
bey bey'a' jachtaH}; so I wrote:

qanchoHtaHvIS nuv, choHbe'; not choHbej vay'. 'a qaStaHvIS yInDaj DISmey,
DI'onmeyna'Daj 'agh 'aghqu' 'aghchu'

So here comes the question..

Would the {qaStaHvIS yInDaj DISmey, DI'onmeyna'Daj 'agh 'aghqu' 'aghchu'}
be appropriate for this purpose? I can't see anything grammatically wrong
with it.

--
Dana'an
https://sacredtextsinklingon.wordpress.com/
Ζεὺς ἦν, Ζεὺς ἐστίν, Ζεὺς ἔσσεται· ὦ μεγάλε Ζεῦ
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