[tlhIngan Hol] {'e' qa'} "instead of" with the {qa'} bearing suffixes

[mayqel qunen'oS]

Suppose I write:

{pu' DIlo'; yan DIlo' 'e' qa'chugh, maQap}
if we use phasers instead of swords, we'll win

Would this be correct/acceptable?

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