[tlhIngan Hol] quotation with {jatlhbogh nuv}

[mayqel qunen'oS]

In english we can say: "yadda yadda yadda, and then appeared a man
saying I'm kahless".

Could we do something similar in klingon, by writing: {yaDDa yaDDa
yaDDa, 'ej ghIq narghpu' jatlhbogh nuv, qeylIS jIH} ?

I feel there's something weird in the klingon version of that
sentence, but I don't know exactly what that is.

~ mayqel qunen'oS