[tlhIngan Hol] 'op jajmey..

[mayqel qunen'oS]

SuStel:
> I hope you don't mind the criticism

By all means ! Not only do I not mind, but I encourage it. Unless someone
is being corrected, how can he ever hope to improve ?

SuStel:
> it would help readability if you grouped
> your sentences in thematically related
> paragraphs

hmm..

Only now that you mentioned it, I realized that I tend to change line
often, after a sentence/sentences.

Of course you're right. Indeed it can be confusing, so I'll keep that in
mind.

~ mayqel qunen'oS
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