[tlhIngan Hol] Silmarillion - For am I not a Vala also ?

[mayqel qunen'oS]

SuStel:
> Your translation, meaning no offense, is
> very choppy and difficult to read
> compared to the original.

No problem, 'amerI'qa' jupwI' !

I always want people correcting me, because without being corrected, how
can someone ever improve ?

SuStel:
> Singular: Noldo, Vala
> Plural: Noldor, Valar

Good to know, thanks.

SuStel:
> tlhab 'ej jaq

Believe it or not, I'd totally forgotten that we had {jaq}.

SuStel:
> Vala chIwmeH, jIH nIv law' Valimar
> Valar Hem nIv puS

This somehow confuses me.

If you'd written just {Vala'e' jIH nIv law' Valimar Valar Hem nIv puS}, I
could understand it better.

But why did you chose to add the {vala chIwmeH} ?

SuStel:
> puHvam langvo' vIqem

I thought of using {qem}, but I wondered whether by using it, it would give
a meaning like "I will physically carry you".

~ cxcxcxx
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