[tlhIngan Hol] A ridiculous event

[SuStel]

On 11/23/2016 10:11 AM, mayqel qunenoS wrote:
> jIHaDchoHta'DI',

The *-ta'* here is unnecessary, and could be interpreted in multiple 
ways; it's not strictly wrong. But if you just said *jIHaDchoHDI',* 
you're saying /as soon as I begin studying,/ which is obviously what 
you're going for.


> 'ej jIbuS 'e' vInID,

*'e' vInIDDI'*


> 'ej SIbI' muHotchoH yIQ vay' ! 

*vay' yIQ*

or even better:

*yIQwI'*

**

> ghIq jIleghmeH nachwIj vItlhe'taH, 'ej ghIch yIQ vItu' !
>

*vItlhe'lI'* would work so much better here.


On 11/23/2016 10:11 AM, mayqel qunenoS wrote:

> ben law', jIHaDmeH yotlhmajDaq vIjaH.
>
> pa', jIpawta'DI' wa'DIch quSlabDaq jIba' 'ej ghIq jIHaDchoH..
>
> 'ach, pIj qaS wanI'vam Huj:
>
> jIHaDchoHta'DI', 'ej jIbuS 'e' vInID, pay' wab vIQoychoH. Huj wabvam 
> 'ej tlhaQ: *sniff* *sniff* *sniiiif*..
>
> 'ej SIbI' muHotchoH yIQ vay' !
>
> wa'DIch jIQub: qaStaH nuq jay' ? ghIq jIleghmeH nachwIj vItlhe'taH, 
> 'ej ghIch yIQ vItu' ! mularghtaH vavwI' dog..
>
> toH, ngugh dogvaD jIjatlh: *hey* maqoch.. Doch qaq DaqaSnISmoHbogh 
> tu'be'lu''a' ? be' dog DaSam DaneHbe''a' ?
>
> 'ej ghIq - Do' -, jIHvo' tlheD dog..
>

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